A Soft Light (concrete)
ASoftLightReflectsauras forour silhouettesflickering a dancehot upon four wallsfrom candles romanceThese shadowed formstease back and forth,feelings transformto goforthasa room reflects mutual...
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Dear Su,Actually very well done, in that you have attempted several almost contridictary things all within one poem.I'm glad you gave us muller def - but then it should NOT be a cap C.One or two other...
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This one does draw you in Susanne. Nice vivid imagery and good content. I so very much enjoyed reading you Excellent write!
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Hmmm Alan ~ you have given me much to mull aboutand I shall keep your suggestions in mind as I polishyet thanks so much for I do appreciate!!!! I've alreadytaken the 'M' out of muller SusanneKaren ~...
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This is really nice SuSannne and I am amazed at how you can make the picturecome out so well. I could almost see the two people dancing in the candlelight.Good Jobber indeed!!!Love, Mom
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Ah MoM ~ the dance is quite often, romance,bitten by realitiy but it can be holy too.Wrote it yesterday out of curiousity if I could because of my sometimes importance of nunances. You are the best!!!...
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Hon, I like your aura. Our instant is eternity, eternity is the now. Wu-Men
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As I've liked yours Cass, from day 1upon this board and love yoursignature. Thanks!!! SuSanne
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A concrete poem of softness and love lights, a contradiction in terms which works perfectly M lady
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Ah Ivor ~ Thank you!!! "concrete" was the word I was trying to remember for this type of poem. And then more importently, for your words, thank you!!!SuSanne
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The shape reminded me of a wooden soldier. It's eroticism with a spiritual twinge. The aura is a result of skin gone flush, and angels dancing on the head of your pen."I love being a writer, but I...
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SuSanne, I am glad I had the opportunity to read your pictured candle. This poem painted a delightful picture. It was a double pleasure in that not only was it a feast for the mind; but it was a feast...
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Jan ~ What a lovely thing to say, ty Curtis ~ Your astute read on my poem is just what I intended and I thank you so for that as well as the nom which has come as a total surprise thisSat. morn for...
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Susanne,Do me a favour and fill the world with your "soft light;" for if that is what it is, give us excess of it! Dreams are fulfilled in lines like this.Rich
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Ah Rich ~ There are so many waysof lighting a soft light and last nightI had the fun of dancing to one of my favoriteRock an' Roll bands and though the light wassoft, it was strong Sweet dreams my...
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